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Amateurs Under Pressure1
DG (9/19/1963 / )

Amateurs Under Pressure1

Filling my mind with visions and dreams.
Lighting a candle as i yell and scream.
Laughing at loud at the prophets and
kings, they promise mircles and wonders
for some spare change.
Filling my life with comedies and disasters,
holding on to hope as i drown in the
water, and then out of the blue a wise
man points at me and says, stand up
its only a foot of water.

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Comments (3)

Great Poem David, Love how it's written. It is very unique. Take care.
Wonderfully written, the ending is great... standing, blinking, oh yeah.....
It's true- you can't really see the whole picture till someone puts it into perspective. Good show :)