An Advice

Teasing and calling one names
These are the dirtiest games
Picking holes in one's deeds
One sows the evil seeds
Being jealous and worried
What is there to be hurried?
Destiny works in its time
Before luck no dollar, no dime
The wheel of time never stops
To catch it man only hops
But never comes to his hand
And slips away like sand
So be more and more cosistent
Never let your soul on rent.

by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Comments (11)

this is a really nice and meaningful poem. thanks for showing it to me.
I love to read this poem... it is very stylish in mocking the heat of envy & jealousy in human and how it could damage the person within... Such a good poem with a new way to say... hush the fool...! ! ! Well done my friend...! ! !
Great advice....specially the last line is highly applaudable....10
A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
Sound advice as we travel down life's highway, Dorian Grey sold his soul I would rather stick to your advice and enjoy life' reward, excellent words to follow+++++10
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