JTE (17/04/51 / Edinburgh)

An Alien's Valentine

Come be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy;
I'll give you babies, one, two, three,
A girl, an alien, and a boy.

Don't be so very nervous!
Relax, unwind, be cool!
With an IQ like an asteroid
I'm hardly your average fool.

You may think me presumptuous
But I haven't yet begun,
My astronomical fantasies
Are sexy and they're fun.

So be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy,
The stars are advantageous,
Come on now, don't be coy!

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Comments (6)

haha cool man. Very fun as greenwolf said...the rhyme scheme was also excellent, and I love how you fit in the baby alien mention...slightly quirky as i think all good poetry should be lol 10/10
Well done, my man. Fun, the way poetry should be. GW62
Would that be an illegal or legal alien? Very fun! - chuck
Mondo-bizarro fun, John! Let's see whatcha got for Halloween! ! ! Esther : ]
That was quite interesting! Preets
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