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An Exquisite Hurt
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An Exquisite Hurt

Love is exciting
Like Wild West gunfire
Friday night,
Tender mouths kissing
To a heartbeat rhythm
Pulsating body sexual heat!

I’m going to leap
Like a wild mountain goat
Over obstacles of regret
Until you place your hand
On my thrilling chest
And forget
Everybody else!

I’m electrified
When you
Take off your skirt
Or tug on my shirt,
Fantasy experiment
Crashes all my senses
With an exquisite hurt!

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Comments (7)

Makes you want to say that sex is all! (Of course, it's not; still...)
I could feel the enrgy and the frenzy in this poem. I liked this very much. You have a really awesome grasp on description.
I love the energy in this one, Uriah.
The first stanza carries the excitement...and your images are good. I love the title. Raynette
why do you place exclamation marks on everything? interesting...
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