An Exquisite Hurt

Love is exciting
Like Wild West gunfire
Friday night,
Tender mouths kissing

by Uriah Hamilton Click to read full poem

Comments (7)

Makes you want to say that sex is all! (Of course, it's not; still...)
I could feel the enrgy and the frenzy in this poem. I liked this very much. You have a really awesome grasp on description.
I love the energy in this one, Uriah.
The first stanza carries the excitement...and your images are good. I love the title. Raynette
why do you place exclamation marks on everything? interesting...
Good one! I really liked the first stanza best....
oooo....I felt that one. :)