The Path

I walked down a path
I relised there was no grass
Just sand
Leading to the old mans land

by Jake McCarthy

Comments (3)

Great metaphorical poem... " One is falling to the chest of naught and another is rising to fall, ....wave from the unknown point" Classical poetry..I have enjoyed a lot
Beautiful poem with imagery......
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