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An Old Man

an old man
a bare house
the big one, the red rose
cherries, and a pool
no water, no children
next door is a road
wet eyes waiting
simple house, simple heart
water drop, a table cloth
a bread, a chees, a date
and a wall...
over there a happy child
again an old man
alon with stick
it is my picture on water
which is crying silent and lonliness
a garden again cherries and rose
an old man is waking
it is end of his dream.

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beautiful poem, i hope you be successful in future, keep writting
beautiful i wonder if it is with design you have given it a cryptic sparse feel.... but it creates a fab effect and lends so much meaning to the poem at many levels. loved reading it be happy :)