An Unpassionate Night

Poem By Lee Fones

standing in the doorway
in her see through lingerie
thought about our trip to Norway
and shop that sold patisserie

her blonde flowing hair
her eyes bluer than the sea
reminded me of a pair
the best I've ever see

walking towards me
im flat out on bed
she'd a cup of tea
goodnight then, i said

Comments about An Unpassionate Night

Expression of love a wonderful feeling in human mind which is nicely written in the poem.
her blonde flowing hair her eyes bluer than the sea reminded me of a pair the best I've ever see Beautiful poem on love theme. I enjoyed it.Well done Keep it up.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan


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