An Untold Love

Vitreous shinning of moon,
In the springtime mother's pique
A train carried me from dark to light,
A rose bud bloomed-

I have grasped roses
And devotion songs together,
Hands with my dreamed darling boon,
A dream decided real,
Never forgotten,
Meaning of love as moonlit,
Learned from thy

Now onward-I see
Narrow uneven path,
Aye passionate pain stressed,
Thee roses faded and wither,
In a missing melancholy song-

On a full moon I bide on a boat for thy
Until ache twilight horizon-
Behind apart from time-
A mature pensive ripened,
An abstract passion craved for romance

Oh! It's beyond the wording,
Oh! My darling-
Oh! I forever behold thy
Oh! ho! yet an untold love
I have felt! !

@Musfiq us shaleheen,
30th Decmber,2012

by Musfiq us shaleheen

Comments (21)

On a full moon I bide on a boat for thy Until ache twilight horizon- Behind apart from time- A mature pensive ripened, An abstract passion craved for romance Truly beautiful, a nice lovely poem, I have no alternate but to rate it 10 and include in my favorite poems.
A train carried me from dark to light, can be compared to our teachers and parents who carry us back to Allah Your poem has great intensity
Romance.... I feel this is one of the best pieces I have read.
so romantically piece of art. now i think this love is told it is no more else untold. best ~nb .
So true.... This is indeed an abstract poem craved for romance. The way you have put your words is so beautiful that it makes me feel beautiful about love.... I loved this.... I actually did...! !
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