(13/08 / hyderabad, A.P, India.)

Animals Are Better Than Humans

i saw birds pecking at a snake,
to save nest of their fellow mate.
i saw a lioness standing against the lions pride,
to save a calf, she did fight.

i saw monkeys fight a dog to save kitten,
though in salvaging they got bitten.
these all made me think,
there i saw love all around.

then i saw a man stabbing his friend,
for money was more important in his ken.
i saw a woman killing her daughter,
because she was not happy with the girl's father.

i saw a brother killing the other,
with his own hand,
just for a piece of land.
and all these made me think,
animals are much more better.

who kill because of nature, just to feed.
on money, land and position they dont pay heed.
but humans are not humans any more.
who re infecting the world in whole.

going against their nature,
as on money, land and position they pay heed.
and kill others even when they have all they need
they keep destroying each other.
and i think compared to humans animals are better.

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Comments (5)

Actually, truly, really, factually, generally, more than them heartily, I am surprised to see suck a poem like this with deep insight and hidden meaning of it. in this poem, it is simply summarized how modern degraded himself as a bumptious Buffoon! 'then i saw a man stabbing his friend, for money was more important in his ken. i saw a woman killing her daughter, because she was not happy with the girl's father. i saw a brother killing the other, ' Holy moly! I wonder at this kind of poetry. It has power to make people think better about their misdeeds. So human race mend you ways otherwise dipping and diving dooms will be arriving. Hats of to the poetess! concentrate on these themes....... Awesome wrtie...........
Human is the greatest creature complete with emotion and mind, animal can go far from how modern they can be..but how modern can we reach is not milestone of the level of humanity, so i could say human are better if they use mind to do wise, the mind we have to control all life..if we lose it yeah what diff with animal, maybe it's true we can get lower than that..I know the thinking you try to ask here which is good :) wonderful...hope we all can look it in positive...coz we all now how we can consider we are human if humanity is not exist in us...and mind without thinking is same living without mind..cool write_Unwritten Soul (sorry for late respond)
Animals go on instinc, humans do by there emotions, and experiences. man has a choice, but often makes the wrong one, a good observence, well written
Wow. Truly, this poem shows what has happened to humanity. Animals have become more human than humans. Likewise, humans have become beasts, because of their greed. AWESOME poem, kind madam.
I love this poem. It shows such a valid point animals are truly better than humans, what is the point of humans being more intelligent if you are going to be vicious for no reason.