LB (31 may 1991 / empangeni, south africa)

Another Love Song

last night we were alright.but now i feel all alone.
you keep ignoring me, you don't pick up the phone.
was it something that i did? or maybe something that i said?
one minute we we're laughing, and the next our love was dead.

it's over now; and i can't beg you to stay.
i guess we're over now; but did it have to end this way?
and we're over now; and i'm not feeling ok.
so we're over now.what else is there to say?

our conversations were so long, but now we can't even say hello
when did all this happen? where did our love go?
i dream about us at night, i dream we still had fun.
but i wake up then i realise that both of us are done.

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Comments (10)

nice words of love, well written poem..10 from me
There's a lot of heartbreak interwoven into that love song! good work.
you sang this song well I could feel the pathos in every word hey Londiwe-Anurag told me to read yours. Good I did it--your really good -10 anjali (do read mine Michael Jackson and Love Letters on the Sands of Tme)
so so sad, really hope you can or did move on, that was a a heartfelt poem, that seems very honest
i like the simplicity of the poem...speaks of how quickly feelings can change and one is left to figure out the why, when, and how of it all...and to go forward with the what now question as one surveys the ruins
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