(15.12.1975 / Manikgonj (Bangladesh))

Another 'You'

Some times feel so alone,
Breath disordered
As a thunder storm.
This Mind wants to go very close of you.
I want to tight your whole body-
With my strong arm.
Want to tell silently,
All of my deposited hardship.
Want to kill myself………..
But can not.
In my mind have another “You”
That “You” always make me stop of my plan.
Then I can do nothing.
Make me cool down and sit quietly.
Look the open sky
And calculate of my passed life
Where I have leaved so many thing.

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Comments (1)

Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2