LMG (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Anticipation Haiku

The grape vine rises

then bends towards apple flowers

I wait to quench thirst

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 6 votes ) 9

Comments (9)

this is the best of your haiku I have read so far. keep it up.
that gave the real taste of wine
superb write...........................
This is perfect.......just so nice. I liked it..............10
Dorothy after I got your coment on y e-mail i went this haiku and recounted.it does follow the 5-7-5 syllable count.Thanks for the ten.
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