the weather went mental
after we stopped talking
as if dysfunction
had set upon the heavens.

by s./j. goldner

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Comments (17)

good poem, SJ.
Dysfunction is an interesting word to use here. I have to agree with the other commenters below...you say so much with so few words.
It is amazing how mihc you can say in just those lines, great poem and thx for commenting mine!
aphoristic.. great work- i have memorised the lines tnx.
Brevity at its best - packed to the hilt with meaning. Take care
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