I'd like to spend
April, sitting on a hill,
With a mushroom for
a parasol and violets
by s./j. goldner
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19 Nov 2018 03:37
A really colourful write, enjoyed
05 Oct 2018 06:18
Daintily beautiful - and comical - sentiments. Liked a lot.
09 Apr 2017 02:56
Lovely poem, this is the season...
28 Jun 2010 11:50
I've been looking for a good 'springtime' poem. It puts a smile on your face, imagining the serene situation. Garden of Eden-esque.
18 Jan 2009 11:16
What a nice poem. It's so touching! You obviously set your standards pretty high from the very start Susan Jane! ! !
Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) .
23 Dec 2008 11:39
Excellent imagery. I just loved the mushrooms for a parasol. The poem was music and I love it. Karin Anderson
29 Oct 2008 03:30
I really like this poem. Wonderfully written; and nature is my favorite topic.
Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis)
28 Sep 2008 01:12
Golden cords playing music, among blossoms and call us to dance. Splendid imagery of April (heart of the Spring) . Golden cords shining under the sun of poetry! I give 10+ to amazing Susan of 9 years old! ! Thanks dearest Susan. Joseph Josephides
25 Sep 2008 05:36
'Flowers with green silk stockings'This is my favorite poem! ! ! Wish I were there now! ! Now has flowing words with wonderful imagiry! ! ! 10! !
31 May 2008 10:24
April Music filled my eyes and ears.....really beautiful...
01 Feb 2008 06:55
I liked this poem because it had April in it's title, and I could greatly appreciate how the music provided a comparison to nature. I thought this was nice and surrealistic.
31 Jan 2008 02:10
I like that.............................................................
16 Jan 2008 03:02
I adore this piece! I love the images in my mind right now, like I'm Alice and I flipped into the rabbit hole. Such wonderful descriptions, and what an ache I have for spring at the moment! Truly great, missy!
24 Oct 2007 03:40
Beautiful - I love the lilt; I love the imagery; I love the interwoven message. Take care
20 Sep 2007 05:31
Your imagery is amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Awesome job... the pictures you painted danced before my eyes and made me smile. I loved this! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Keep up the great work. :) Shannon
13 Sep 2007 12:31
MMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm. I close my eyes and wish for april. Wonderful and vivid.
12 Sep 2007 07:38
Beautiful. You take the ordinary and change it into the extraordinary.
10 Sep 2007 12:12
This was simply adorable. I loved it!
09 Sep 2007 01:45
Shall we meet in Portugal? Shall I bring the sonnets or shall thee? Perhaps we'll make them up together by the sea.
22 Aug 2007 08:00
well somehow I missed this one in my previous tromps through your pages...and so, belatedly, it is a perfect study in meter control. love the innocent message and carefree feel. superbly divine. -Tailor