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...Are You Really
MD ( / virginia, usa)

...Are You Really

Poem By Manonton Dalan

i open my window
to let my soul
in search
for you,

cold draft came
with vengeance
giving me goose bumps
but i endured
mumbling your name

i sat down
bowing my head
to more frustration
to a sight of a squirrel
digging nuts in rubble

bright idea
i called your number
listening to your fading voice
“i call you later”

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Comments (7)

very good, i can see guiter chords in this poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
i like the 'bowing your head' part it is like i am watching a scene while outside a window marundunong ka bali bali thank you for reading my poem 'hair less' haha gabay kon naramdaman ya manmaliw ya gwapo anggano magano labat
touching and lyrical; good poem, Manonton
open my window to let my soul wander in search for you, .thius is how u loose your patience when you donot find your loved one..... it is beautiful poem.. to the point dear.....10 read mine... i miss.... Mary to marry..... miss i miss u
Very good! the first three verses remind me of 'The Song of Wandering Aengus'. The last: a modern version of it. Well done!
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