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As I Feel The Breeze
JF (10/10/69 / Louisville, Kentucky)

As I Feel The Breeze

As I feel the breeze coming from the ocean shore,
I think of how I loved you more and more
As all those days and nights went by
And the seagulls flew across the sky.
I think of how you loved me, too,
And we promised each other that we would make it through.
I realize that those times were long ago.
But I just want to let you know
That my feelings for you have not changed.
Maybe we can start over again?

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Comments (3)

Quite lovely. The love sure shines in this sweet poem of yours. Thanks for sharing. I gave it a 10. Spiritsong
one of the greatest poems ever written 10
beautifuul feeling in a touching poem...