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I love listening
to pinging sound
as it struck that
dimpled ball to
distance I can't
see it anymore
I will find later

sometimes it goes
for hours not letting
interruption interfere
some times I lost track
of time 'til darkness
I will find later
or somebody will

by Manonton Dalan

Comments (2)

wandering lonely little arctic flower to summer land and sun and Eden...what next? of course the reader has to infer that she is feeling snared or relieved? ....you have to answer Emily- 10
Arctic - cold. I want summer.