PE (May 27 / Fort Polk, Louisiana)

As Life And Soul Go

When life leaves a body
With it goes the soul
Just the need to be free
The need to reach its goal
As life and soul go
The body lies still
Deflating, becoming a corpse
Nothing to enter or to fulfill
When the soul hits its destination
It is so content
But the body decays
For underground its time is spent

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Comments (3)

This poem is awsume, i really like it
i love how u explain that the soul drifts off to something better and leaves the body to decay over time great poem keep up the great work- Sabrina
BEAUTIFUL! ! oh em gee, pay..this poem doesnt rhyme! ! wow, thats a first :) iloveyoubabygirl!