Attraction

Her dress floats elegantly
Under the bright lights
Of the dance floor

by Rose Marie Juan Austin Click to read full poem

Comments (16)

Lovely and tastefully sensual. Burnin' up the website, Rose!
A wonderfully created poem. Really loved it.
A small poem but very powerful as a romantic write! The natural attraction, a young man feels towards a beautiful girl in rhythmic motion is powerfully captured.On the dance floor, she is a marvel and so is your poem! A sure 10
Legs sway seductively To the rhythm Of UnchainedMelody. fine and real romantic poem.
Legs sway seductively To the rhythm Of UnchainedMelody........nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem with romantic expression.
unchained melody, seductive swaying..... beautiful poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony
His eyes were glued To her face Waiting to arrest her eyes That are so lovely.........this stanza justifies the title of the poem incisively. Beautiful poem.10
Attraction is perfectly shown in this poem.+++10
One of the deepest poems that I had read like it
His eyes were glued to her face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Her dress floats elegantly Under the bright lights Of the dance floor....Lovely expression. I liked it..Thanks for sharing!
Beauty dancing in a poem on the music of love.
Beautifully penned.. Loved every lines
Rose Marie, such a lovely poem...10+++
An well crafted write Rose Marie. You have visualized a pair caught in the pool of attraction. Nudershada
This poem has both attraction and pathos, wonderful, thanks for sharing the poem with us