Her dress floats elegantly
Under the bright lights
Of the dance floor
by Rose Marie Juan Austin
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Frank James Davis
18 May 09:10
Lovely and tastefully sensual. Burnin' up the website, Rose!
24 Apr 03:44
A wonderfully created poem. Really loved it.
06 Apr 01:55
A small poem but very powerful as a romantic write! The natural attraction, a young man feels towards a beautiful girl in rhythmic motion is powerfully captured.On the dance floor, she is a marvel and so is your poem! A sure 10
03 Dec 2018 08:49
Legs sway seductively To the rhythm Of UnchainedMelody. fine and real romantic poem.
01 Nov 2018 03:48
Legs sway seductively To the rhythm Of UnchainedMelody........nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem with romantic expression.
27 Oct 2018 03:51
unchained melody, seductive swaying..... beautiful poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony
16 Jul 2018 12:44
His eyes were glued To her face Waiting to arrest her eyes That are so lovely.........this stanza justifies the title of the poem incisively. Beautiful poem.10
Robert Murray Smith
15 May 2018 11:28
Attraction is perfectly shown in this poem.+++10
Aldouz San Antonio
19 Mar 2018 04:07
One of the deepest poems that I had read like it
Edward Kofi Louis
02 Feb 2018 12:53
His eyes were glued to her face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dr Dillip K Swain
18 Jan 2018 10:40
Her dress floats elegantly Under the bright lights Of the dance floor....Lovely expression. I liked it..Thanks for sharing!
17 Jan 2018 08:58
Beauty dancing in a poem on the music of love.
17 Jan 2018 03:36
Beautifully penned.. Loved every lines
Bernard F. Asuncion
17 Jan 2018 01:10
Rose Marie, such a lovely poem...10+++
16 Jan 2018 11:06
An well crafted write Rose Marie. You have visualized a pair caught in the pool of attraction. Nudershada
16 Jan 2018 10:40
This poem has both attraction and pathos, wonderful, thanks for sharing the poem with us