(some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Good Luck Song

The stars might shine tonight
So you probably want to be in a
Moonlight field
Watching the stars
Shining in the sky
And I wish that you have
Plenty of Good luck
With the stars tonight

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I consider it to be a very good effort and approach Bri, Thank you
That is SOOO nice :) It is a lovely poem and story. Reading to kids is a great thing to do, it has the potential to open a whole new world to the recipients.
A cute poem- and a good thing you're doing- for the kids- and for yourself. I might have to reevaluate my opinion of you and conclude that you really aren't as bad a guy as everyone says!
i had to edit to capitalize after at the start of the line after a while, to a nearby table, but it hasn't changed yet. i hope it does before you read the poem. :) bri