LMG (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Autumn Treasure Haiku

Autumn leaves falling

creating a brown carpet

mushrooms spring upwards

User Rating: 4,4 / 5 ( 5 votes ) 5

Comments (5)

They say the awe of nature is reflected in Haiku. You have succeeded so well, the falling and upwards motion and the brown carpet paint a beautiful picture in my mind. 10 Karin Anderson
I like this poem very much! It reminds me of the delights and observations of children.
glints of hope skittering across that brown carpet wonderful
A wonderful haiku.... A real autumn treasure. ' Autumn leaves falling ' and ' Mushrooms spring upward '..... A beautiful contrast....10/10. Regards Naseer
Hello my Haiku Poet...another good one! 10....Ah!