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Awakening (An Erotic Tanka)
(11/26/1971 / New York)

Awakening (An Erotic Tanka)

lovers eyes are wide,
mind fevered with want and kiss...
allows warm waking
of transmitted messages
folded, seeping desire.

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Oh, I love this one! Too bad it's so short! :) Elya Thorn
Sensually eloquent, Eila.....Nicely done, as per usual ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.