DN ( / Bellevue, Nebraska)

Ayúdame!

Oh God, oh God, Dios!
Ayúdame! Ayúdame!
Come save me from my apathy,
Once more I need you close.

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 3 votes ) 2

Comments (2)

Always, we need Him close... Well said, Daniel. We know what we know and need.
I don't know how you managed the accents - I always have to simply inser an apostrophe - but I think it ought to be Dio's - nevertheless, this is a heartfelt cry, and I would't change anything else. Your compact style is very striking- your passion is very moving.