PE (May 27 / Fort Polk, Louisiana)

Love Me Without Pity

We 've been together,
Thinking it would last forever.
One little fight, we scatter.
But, couldn't live without her-
So, I begged to come back.

It wasn't Obvious-
She was fed up.
She took me not for a lover
but a brother without a Lover;
She felt Pity
and took me back.

But now, it's Obvious-
it's Pity and not Love.
Thus, this Love is Nothing!
And for Pity's sake;
making things easy-
lets part ways.
For I wish not Pity
but Love always.

Love Me if You Love Me;
Dont Love Me because of Pity!

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 3 votes ) 3

Comments (3)

I agreed with Adeline at first. It took me a couple of reads (worth it tho) . Definitely a potential great. The end is stretched, but I do love the delivery. It just kinda betrays the count. Love it tho.
very powerful. i feel that way bout my ex. great job! !
Strong langauge that I enjoyed thank you.