JR (28/06/90 / Sheffield)

Jersey

Spring in the east
Born into the wild
Life is never was

Morning ecstasy
Afternoon delight
A nighttime desert

Fall in the southwest
Candles burn in heat
Dark as chocolate

Winter's unjust gloom
Birds can’t lift and fly
Craving for summer

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Comments (6)

There so much passion in your poetry...its lovely
I like this one the best of what I have seen, so far. Word choice, flow, and brevity were all effective.
wow, i love the Rhythm of this poem, your quite the poet.
I like this poem's repetition of beginning words. It gives the poem a crispness that conveys a lot of meaning with simple words. The words are very carefully chosen. This is the ideal poem to read because it is short and very poetic. I hate to read long poems. Very good poem.
for such a young age you have a very strong hold on words...in the words of sherrie, strong and beautiful sums this poem up perfectly...never stop writing
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