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Beachday Haiku
LMG Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Beachday Haiku

Jogging much closer

curious seagulls surround

sandcastle builder

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Comments (6)

it makes me want to go to the beach myself.. truly poetic u are and u amazing! !
excellent you caught the essence of the sea side jim
beautiful haiku..artistic beach so inviting... the sandcastles...reminds us of our childhood days...
your pen brush seems to be so sharp that it is able to stroke a few lines and reveal a canvas much bigger than ordinary mind could hold. i like it. () BLack jaypee
whatta beautiful beach.....with sand so white and water so clear......clear for joggers to see corals better....nice lines dear... naizz
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