Beauty And Love

Spring has come to embrace your cheeks
Lovely breeze caresses your peaks
Love itself comes and seeks
Through out the days through out the weeks

Permission to touch submission to take
The fragrance of your body to a lake
For eternal sublime for its sake
The relation of love one should partake

Where flowers have grown
Where love is known
Where beauty is shown
In sophisticated tone

Fairies sing a song to dance
About your beauty and much more
Pain plaintively cries in core
The world has not seen it before

Beauty is to die while love remains
In all hatred and disdains
In all difficulties and pains
There are no losses but only gains


Copyright 2013 (CHAINS OF LIFE)

by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Comments (21)

Where flowers have grown Where love is known Where beauty is shown In sophisticated tone... These lines are so deep. It has such a beauty in words.
A very expressive and a meaningful write, thank you
All poems always in neat and lovely best end rhymes. I have enjoyed very much this Beauty and Love poem. Thank you for sharing this Beauty And Love. A 10 and myriad more. GBU Col Muhamad.
beautiful lesson- Beauty is to die while love remains In all hatred and disdains In all difficulties and pains There are no losses but only gains 10++++
You really are a tortured soul. I can't make out your English. Take the first stanza: Spring has come to embrace your cheeks Lovely breeze caresses your peaks Love itself comes and seeks Through out the days through out the weeks What is lovely breeze caresses your peaks? The first line is good: Spring has come to embrace your cheeks. Are you talking about a woman, or are you talking about the mountains? Or are you in some 'moonland' of yours? The 3rd and 4th line are banal and superfluous, to say the least. Why throughout the days and throughout the weeks? Why not throughout the months and throughout the years? And why not throughout the decades and centuries? When all we have is a strong hot breeze. Global warming has killed winter and spring. And frankly, in your poem I see nothing. But what hurts is the nonsense written by Chinedu Dike. He says, Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Beautiful love poem written in good rhyme scheme with insight. It is because of poets like these and critics like these, that I had stopped writing poems for Poemhunter. This site has become PoemGarbage.
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