SB (03-06-1990 / coimbatore (now in chennai) ..)

Beauty Of An Evening

On an evening spring,
euphony from a guitar string,
maple leaves shed from trees.
yellow ground and a gracious breeze.

People view scenes that trends,
joyous with family and frenz.
Birds chirp the melodious notes,
sitting over lamplight posts.

Shining sun concealed behind hills.
dark clouds pour down glassy drizzles.
Little flowers blossom on the riverside,
water moves gracefully beside.

Bluish sky turns red-orange colour,
incomes a candy odour.
moon from farside says a hi.
welcoming the stary night.

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Comments (5)

hey! thats a really beautiful poem. very descriptive! i can actually visualize these scenes! !
Brilliant imagery! ! ! !
well described. I like this piece a lot! !
hey hi shyam...thank u so much fr ur comments...well ur hav gr8 writing skills too...a very well written poem....
Ah, how lovely. You seem to really love life. THat's what it takes to be a great poet.