Before Sleeping

Poem By inguruwattadewage pushpadewa

Sun drowned in the sea at the eve
Shadow of the darkness came to all space
Street light towers bulbs were sparkle
Sparkling was car, buses, bike headlight as a flame

Passengers were decreased from coach and get off
Proud statues has been wetter without a roof
Policemen were hidden among dark for catch up thief
Plotting a ship it has been covered there there sky half

Quitting was all shop keepers without number of street dog
Queens like female dummies in the show case were smiling
Question lost people came to the restaurant forgathering
Quality liquor bottle ordered by them and drinking

Restaurant is quit place but also some body was sigh
Rose chicken and cashew nuts taste was very high
Romantic lovers face delight by there hearth
Road became empty that saw among there front door wrath

Comments about Before Sleeping

Romantic lovers face delight by there hearth Road became empty that saw among there front door wrath.....beautifully described the activeness about the surrounding after the nightfall, evening; after over the working hours everyone to own way, night comes to its depth and happening around many types of events which acutely described in this poem; congrats for being this beautiful poem as POD…..from me 5*****
Good reminiscence about the night. Well done!
Wonderful to read your evening events. It is interesting to get an insight into others lives and cultures. Thank you
My God! This too is a 'Member Poem of the Day'!
Hmmm....nice poem. New rhyming idea back and front. Somebody is there a technical term for this kind of poem. Wanna try it some time


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