Beginning Lines Drew Me In Mesmerized

when I see a cold critic write
a comment stating a 'beginning
lacks substance to draw you in'

which draw me in hook line and sinker
then my friend I cannot agree because
that beginning drew me in mesmerized

fired imagination with flames of fire
my desire was inspired to write write write
thus again am I lost in an eternal night

Copyright © Terence George Craddock

by Terence George Craddock (afterglows echoes of starlight)

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