Poem Hunter
Being Sneaky...
CT (July 13,1993 / Missoula, Montana)

Being Sneaky...

Being sneaky = trouble
Trouble = punishment
Punishment = pain
Pain = loneness
Loneness = sadness

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Comments (9)

you express yourself fluidly, and I agree with Ben, it's great to experiment with different forms of writing, Keep it up!
I like your willingness to experiement with new forms. This helps us realize how we end up sometimes. Poetry is all about expressing feelings. That's what you have done.
keep up the good work...little lady...
haa..! Flicking through your poems.. i like this. The simplicity is nice. As long as you work on developing your verses and just keep pushing yourself to write better every time you get an idea, you'll become a great poet :)
I love short poem thats what i started writting with... Very good and True ~MaXx
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