Between You And I

Poem By Natashe Ahmed

You feed me lies and i believe them.
I tell you all my secrets and you reveal them.

You point at my flaws and i deal with them.
I exaggerate your achievements and you beat them.

You talk back and i smile.
I lean to you for help and you let me fall.

But just one nod of yours fills my day and there i go leaning to you for some more help.

Comments about Between You And I

Very good feeling and expression. I share your feeling.
This poem is true for so many people. Control is another form of toxicity. Pray for the strength to be able to just lean on you. At the end of everything, you is all you have. Put yourself first, you are stronger than you think.
goooood poem... i know this feeling all to well.. i'm just trying to learn to lean on someone else.. but it is so hard...


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