Birthday (Haiku #18)

A newborn cried hard;
Her voice reached the distant seas
where setting sun crept.

by Jez C Brul

Comments (13)

A natural truth has been depicted by you, dear madam, astutely in a concise poem on occasion of birthday. Thanks for sharing.10
A belated birthday wish. Happy days ahead.++10
A sound, successful haiku. Babies seem to cry much louder than they actually do.
Indeed! ! ! And sometimes the mother as well! ! ! That is probably the first and last time a wailing scream like that is music to the mother's ears. Other such cries launch the mother out of bed and into baby's room in.ooo5 seconds! ! Love your image! ! !
Happy birthday! You are aquarius.
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