IOI (7/4/1934 / Hebburn.Co Durham U.K)

Foot-Mark

Mind's like a doormat
Many people step in and out
Press their toes
some get in
some get off

Mind just getting into flashback
Trying to figure out
What sorts of toes
you've got
have you pressed so hard
that the motion of your step
slightly got saved in my heart
OR, that gentle
Every while I remember it makes me giggle
says to heart
Just analyse the mat
Whose was the footmark

-: Festive

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Comments (2)

beautiful message of peace.. beautiful and disciplined poetry as expected.
reminds me of an old military quote i once heard, i forget the exact wording and who said it but it was along the lines of 'once the pin has been pulled, Mr.Grenade is no longer our friend'