AM (July,1975 / Indiana, United States)

Bittersweet

Bittersweet
And I fell
Laughing, crying
Another song

Bittersweet
And then silence
Truth, justice
Going home

Bittersweet
And we kissed
Touching, taking
Seeking desire

Bittersweet
And I knew
Heartache, anger
Shameful release

Bittersweet
And I left
Alone, eager
Selfless acts

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Comments (2)

Excellent choice of title which repeats itself in each stanza. Very well executed.
that was cool the way you like wrote it i really liked it cool. Lylyanna