HM (24/10/1993 / brisbane)

Blood Falling

blood falling

loading bullets
party of beer
late night brawl
lie after lie
to much beer
brawl to far
loaded bullets

blood falling

User Rating: 3,0 / 5 ( 2 votes ) 4

Comments (4)

very nice i see what your trying to say
A very good poem! But a useless way to spill! This character should donate b-cuz at least ya get money (lol)
I agree. Good job. It proves that people should be careful after a few drinks.
ooo! i like this....short and to the point. Simple. I like it.