HM (24/10/1993 / brisbane)

Blood Falling

blood falling

loading bullets
party of beer
late night brawl
lie after lie
to much beer
brawl to far
loaded bullets

blood falling

by Harley Morriss

Comments (4)

very nice i see what your trying to say
A very good poem! But a useless way to spill! This character should donate b-cuz at least ya get money (lol)
I agree. Good job. It proves that people should be careful after a few drinks.
ooo! i like this....short and to the point. Simple. I like it.