CR (26-12-1980 / Malaysia)


Every night I'm tangled in a blanket of stars
Thoughts are just mere thoughts
Without a cause
Bring it on now

I need it - don't let go
I like it - don't fade out
I love it - can't do without

Last night was bundled with more than just odds
Yearning a lot
Thoughts of you sang me a lullaby without a doubt
I need you now. Always

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Comments (4)

You write exceedingly well. This poem is certainly one of my favourites....Z
'blossom' blossomed for someone so dear...
I like the 'sang me a lullaby without a doubt' the use of words conveys feeling^_^
AAAAH! ! ! This is awesome! Brilliance!