! Blue Eyes

What lurks behind those eyes of blue?
What mysteries do they hold?
Those smokey, dreamy bedroom eyes
So sensual and bold;

by Linda Ori Click to read full poem

Comments (14)

if i read correctly what thoughts would come to me.... what a briliant write... keep it up tks with regard for sharing
Absolutely beautiful poem. I found it mesmerizing
Magnificent work with brilliant metaphor. Love this sweet poem with 10.
I love blue eyes though they are full of mysteries!
Beneath the depths of seablue mist, What wonders would I find? ...............splendid
If eyes be windows to the soul, As often poets write, No doubt your soul is beautiful - Blue eyes reflect its light. a fitting finale to a lovely poem -10 anjali
'Just like a cat they stare at me, I wonder what they're thinking - Clear and bright, reflecting light, They process without blinking; ' very true indeed...cats eye most times show feelings of love..cause they r tamed with love...tame your loved ones even with burning eyes..then a doberman or even a rotviolet may not bite yoo..10+++
I loved these lines. If eyes be windows to the soul, As often poets write, No doubt your soul is beautiful - Blue eyes reflect its light. CP
another beautiful write my friend.. are these your eyes' color? wow they are beautiful too!
eyes are the windows to ones soul..they say you took that and did a superb piece relly enjoyed it...gret cheers
A beautifully proportioned, sensuously delivered, superbly crafted poem that reads without a hitch. It is indeed a joy to read one of your poems again Linda. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Eye's speak with volume that no voice can effectively hold a candle to..The spoken word can so easily be expressed to manipilate & deceive....but one will have their hands full, if they are attempting to lie /decive, whwn eye to eye with a person who understands how to read the inability of the human eye to masque contempt & deception.Excellent work, my dear...Midnight, you do R O C K! ~ ~ ~ 2009
All the tell-tale markers of your polished trade on show Linda. Fluent and rhythmic with unforced rhymes. So easy to read and carries the reader away into the depths you've drawn so well. xxx jim
the poem talks lovingly of a pair of loving talking eyes...well composed piece, Linda...pleasing to read...10