Bottleneck

Her rare astonishing love
It's like Braille alphabet.
You have to touch the raised dots and understand.
But caressing is prohibited since a long time.
Then how can he trace this fragile creature?

by nimal dunuhinga

Comments (4)

A very original hymn to touch. Susie.
Extraordinary imagery. An intense mood well sustained. Very original and lovely, Nimal. Regards, Sandra
Wonderful poem, nimal. As usual you have crafted this with amazing imagery, painting a detailed picture in a few short yet beautiful lines. I love the title too! Blessings to you! -TGR (Theresa)
Loads of feeling in this.Something very fragile and beautiful within your words.So worth reading.Thankyou.Love Duncan