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Bowling A Maiden Over! - A Haiku
(15/07/56 / Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.)

Bowling A Maiden Over! - A Haiku

Poem By Dónall Dempsey

Oh my! Ladybird
knocked for six off of hedge
by...big...fat..rain...drop!

User Rating: 2,4 / 5 ( 20 votes ) 1

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Hee hee you've bowled me a googlie! Clever and well obseerved and transformed as usual by your way of seeing things...you never state the obvious... obviously! I like the twists you put on things. A 10! Howzat! Liked the way you incorporated all the cricket terms... it made me laugh. I didn't know if I was a ladybird being knocked off of a leaf by a big fat dropp of water or a fellow poet reading a haiku! love Gina XXX


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