Brittany Be My Girl

Poem By The Poet

Brittany be my girl
and wonderful things
will happen to you.
Brittany be my girl
and good things
will come your way.
Brittany be my girl
and I'll make your
dreams come true.
Be my girlfriend Brittany,
because I want to
make you happy.

Comments about Brittany Be My Girl

This is like a note. The repetition is the name Brittany. This adds memory to the written piece. I thought the last line was a good line. The piece is a short one, so it doesn't need a special ending because it is so focused. But the reference to happy is very, very important and carries a lot of the weight here. GW62


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