CA (08/11/1980 / Los Angeles, California)

Brittany's City

The robin
and her red breast
seranade the warm weather
as the waters gently reprimand
the earth for its advances.
The stars dance upon the laketop,
circling each other with the
rise and fall
of each wave.

This lake is alive!
She has the capability
to meet and greet
other similar entities,
but she knows no city.
Cities harbor stars of a different

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I find some very nice lines, esp. toward the ends of both stanzas. I think 'robin red breast' is overused and may take me away, unless there's a reason I don't see for your using it.