Broken Love

Behind closed eyes
I wish to see
Why you despise
So much of me

I try and surmise
Is this how it’s meant to be?
Your eyes drown mine
not so sentimentally

how could this be?

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'your eyes drown mines...not sentimentally'. I love these two lines. good job!
really good! ! i like your work also and thank you XD
The gentle flow and rhyming in this poem is a delight. Well done. Irene
i really love this poem! please keep writing :)
Well written - good question...how does one know what the other thinks...will watch your work.
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