Broomstick(Haiku 22)

A single broomstick
cannot sweep all the dry leaves
along the church yard.

by Jez C Brul

Comments (14)

An imaginative write. Many interpretations.++10
Not only from church But also from anywhere, ...... interesting, thanks for sharing 10
A very tidy haiku, a snapshot of a churchyard with dry leaves on it: it could be tidier. More than one broomstick is needed.
You are very true. Single broomstick cannot wash out may dried leaves fallen from trees. Unity is strength. This poem is humorously and metaphorically expressed. Revisiting this poem values more.
So true, unity is a powerful force, great example and a creative write!
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