by Jez C Brul
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Robert Murray Smith
22 Jun 2018 11:41
An imaginative write. Many interpretations.++10
02 May 2018 11:19
Not only from church But also from anywhere, ...... interesting, thanks for sharing 10
29 Apr 2018 06:59
A very tidy haiku, a snapshot of a churchyard with dry leaves on it: it could be tidier. More than one broomstick is needed.
29 Apr 2018 04:22
You are very true. Single broomstick cannot wash out may dried leaves fallen from trees. Unity is strength. This poem is humorously and metaphorically expressed. Revisiting this poem values more.
29 Apr 2018 07:49
So true, unity is a powerful force, great example and a creative write!
27 Apr 2018 01:12
It is abeautiful poem on unity in concise with a nice theme. Thanks for sharing.
24 Apr 2018 11:28
There is a limit for what a single person can do or achieve, but there is no limit if a whole group functions together! Collective strength is several times greater than individual strength! You have emphasized the point with a beatuiful example! Great Haiku, Jez!
23 Apr 2018 02:04
Wisdom in a capsule! ! ! ! The very definition of Haiku. Concise and incisive! ! ! Haiku and you are a very good fit! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Bernard F. Asuncion
22 Apr 2018 12:40
Dear Jez, such a very powerful haiku to urge the Binhi Organization to be united in a clean-up drive activity today the world over.....10++++++
21 Apr 2018 11:27
A thoughtful write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
21 Apr 2018 04:54
A good poem on getting along with one another.
21 Apr 2018 04:44
A thought provoking poem..well penned
Edward Kofi Louis
21 Apr 2018 02:58
Peace and love to all mankind! Unity is the key. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
21 Apr 2018 10:46
liked the unity idea. in such a short poem you have packed up so much dear Jez.. thanku. tony