(August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

Pain

I'll claw my eyes
and with a goodbye
kiss
the pain
away

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Comments (5)

So sweet and innocent. A 10 from me, C.J. Shannon
And one can literally see the child and the bee because you relate so well our memories as a child
This is brilliant CJ had me laughing out loud. I have two stories about Bees from my childhood, one concerning my sister the other my dog. Must realte them to you sometime. Sill laffin'
This brought a big wide grin to my face! Thanks CJ, Moyaxx
Such a beautiful poem, wonderfully written. Your talent for children's poetry, never ceases to amaze me. I enjoy reading you so much. Thank you for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.