Somebody Close To Heart...! !

Somebody close to heart.
Took his ways all apart..
Left in middle of the road of life..
I cant take his singe sight..


I was all alone lost my way..
there was nobody to speak no one to say..
Left me with the tears in my eyes..
I cant take his single sight..

I just wanted him to stay..
But it's all too late..
I would have told you what you meant to me..
Because now i pay the price..
As you left me in the middle of the road of life..

But i promise next time you'll be mine..
Nothing will be in mess everything would be fine..
Because next time I'll make you stay..
What are you for me I'll say..
But now with your memories I'll survive..
But i wish I could take your single sight..! ! !

by Shruti parasher

Comments (17)

A short and very enjoyable haiku! Very cute!
Funny stuff, Mary! With so many personal and serious pieces, it's nice to catch a glimpse of your humor! ! Brian
MARY...SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK WHERE YOU ROCK SO WELL HAIKU IS THE SIMPLEST LOOKING VERSE FORM THAT REQUIRES THE MOST COMPLEX OF IMAGE CONCEPT, AS A PITCTORIAL STORY UNIQUELY UNFOLDS IN 17 SYLLABLES....YOUR WORK IS ESPECIALLY UNIQUE AS IT IS A HAIKU ON ITSELF...A DIAMOND CHIP EXAMPLE OF CONTEMPORARY FORM....QUITE CLEVER INDEED, MARY''''''''''''''FRANK
I dug your verse out Shovelled away all the soil And enjoyed your wit
Ah yes, but message always comes across loud and near. Love Duncan
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