MN (11-08-1970 / )

Buried By Haiku

I'm here
amongst the huge pile of haiku.
Can you see me?
I hope you do.

I've been buried here
and I don't know what to do.
Each time I post a poem..
it gets buried by haiku! !

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Comments (17)

A short and very enjoyable haiku! Very cute!
Funny stuff, Mary! With so many personal and serious pieces, it's nice to catch a glimpse of your humor! ! Brian
MARY...SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK WHERE YOU ROCK SO WELL HAIKU IS THE SIMPLEST LOOKING VERSE FORM THAT REQUIRES THE MOST COMPLEX OF IMAGE CONCEPT, AS A PITCTORIAL STORY UNIQUELY UNFOLDS IN 17 SYLLABLES....YOUR WORK IS ESPECIALLY UNIQUE AS IT IS A HAIKU ON ITSELF...A DIAMOND CHIP EXAMPLE OF CONTEMPORARY FORM....QUITE CLEVER INDEED, MARY''''''''''''''FRANK
I dug your verse out Shovelled away all the soil And enjoyed your wit
Ah yes, but message always comes across loud and near. Love Duncan
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