Buried By Haiku
amongst the huge pile of haiku.
Can you see me?
I hope you do.
by Mary Nagy
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29 Apr 2014 11:31
A short and very enjoyable haiku! Very cute!
15 Jun 2006 11:46
Funny stuff, Mary! With so many personal and serious pieces, it's nice to catch a glimpse of your humor! ! Brian
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
03 Jun 2006 03:49
MARY...SO GLAD TO HAVE YOU BACK WHERE YOU ROCK SO WELL HAIKU IS THE SIMPLEST LOOKING VERSE FORM THAT REQUIRES THE MOST COMPLEX OF IMAGE CONCEPT, AS A PITCTORIAL STORY UNIQUELY UNFOLDS IN 17 SYLLABLES....YOUR WORK IS ESPECIALLY UNIQUE AS IT IS A HAIKU ON ITSELF...A DIAMOND CHIP EXAMPLE OF CONTEMPORARY FORM....QUITE CLEVER INDEED, MARY''''''''''''''FRANK
06 Feb 2006 01:42
I dug your verse out Shovelled away all the soil And enjoyed your wit
01 Feb 2006 03:59
Ah yes, but message always comes across loud and near. Love Duncan
22 Jan 2006 03:09
Mary First instinct-write you haiku, then send you shovel, or both in one. I don't particularly like Haiku, but I have to admit I wrote a boatload of them-a good focusing exercise. Thanks for the smile. Phillip Michael Sawatzky
01 Jan 2006 08:09
I like your poem(I think!) . Luckily haiku are short so the digging out shouldn't require much effort, no matter how big the pile! -Rick :)
Simone Inez Harriman
06 Oct 2005 08:45
Mary this one made me smile. Love it.
31 Aug 2005 03:03
XD i love it! it made me smile -ps
27 May 2005 06:51
Mary, , , :) You have said it well here. Same thing has happened to me. Everytime i post a poem, it gets buried by a pile of haiku :) . Nice poem.
Richard A. Davis SR.
26 Apr 2005 06:08
First of all, ty for your comments on my poem for my sons, being a parent you know how I feel. Secondly, I so love this poem.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
08 Apr 2005 01:57
Thanks for the smile! -chuck
06 Apr 2005 02:33
i just love this poem, lol! it is soo true! HBH
25 Mar 2005 08:24
A Japanese haiku found in a Chinese wish-cracker: Poem Read Silence
kenneth william snow
25 Mar 2005 08:05
I see you Mary! This is beautiful, it made me laugh...nice rhymes. The secret is to wait until John logs out and then post your poem. Good Luck! Kenneth
25 Mar 2005 08:00
Very Nice John.........Funny. I do like much of your work.......You are very talented. Mary
john tiong chunghoo
25 Mar 2005 07:56
a haiku inspired by your poem to child - a haiku's the most compact poem