Burned Into Ashes

Poem By Rini Shibu

The wind you blew on me
Took my breath away
Haunted by the memories
The more lost i became

The fire once you burned
Encroached upon me
And it burned me into ashes
What you have done to me

Comments about Burned Into Ashes

Wonderful, absolutely brilliant The abstracted expression is captivating ..10
so so nice written and please write a poem on Break up for me i need to give it to my ex
The fire once you burned Encroached upon me And it burned me into ashes What you have done to me Beautiful. Nicely penned poem. 10+++
Memories! ! ! The past is also part of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
short meaningful hard hitting and leaves one with a void.... pain and loss...of any sort is touching and scarring well chosen words... liked


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